Wednesday, June 5, 2013

Better, Stronger, Faster (Take 2)


Author's note: This is my redo on my Better, Stronger, Faster essay for character development.






Imagine being a world class Astronaut, loved by the entirety of the United States of America. Your career is almost over, and you’ve been spending the last of it test piloting landing vehicles, when suddenly, your entire world literally crashes down around you. How would you feel to wake up from that crash, having only 25% of your original extremities? Would you panic? Would you be scared? Would you lose the will to live? Would you think you were less than human? In the exciting novel "Cyborg", by Martin Caden, Colonel Steve Austin rode that exact emotional roller coaster. He was testing the M3F5 prototype space shuttle that was being tested for soft earth landing, and as he was just about to land it crashed. The next time that the Colonel woke up, he was told that he was now in the care of the OSI and was being given a new arm, two new legs, and a brand new left eye to make up for what he had lost in the crash, all courtesy of the US government. He reacted like any of us would, with rejection. Steve was forced to change how he looked at himself, and to accept these new limbs, and their extra special abilities. Bionics.

In the beginning, Steve is a fun loving guy who doesn’t do as he’s told and takes life for granted. As he goes onto the M3F5 landing plane, he thinks of it as just another job, and doesn’t think about it as one of his last times flying a plane. He puts on his headset and talks to “Huston”, setting up the plane and making sure it’s all set up. And when he’s up in the air, he still has that same mind set. But, when things begin to go south (literally), he loses the cool facade and begins to panic, yelling at Huston to help him, and then.... He crashed. While before and during the beginning of the story Steve is a fun loving guy, through the story’s progression he begins to learns how to take things more seriously.

Rudy Wells changes Steve the most throughout the story because he makes him accept the fact that the Bionics are just as much a part of him as his actual arm, or his actual eye. At first, when he shows Steve his bionic arm, setting it on his lap in the hospital, Steve rejects it, hiding from it with his good arm. Rudy yells at him in frustration, “Steve! This is your ARM!” and basically forces Steve to look at his arm, forcing his good arm down and making him take a good solid look at the mechanic arm that is in front of him. He says, “It’ll look identical to your actual arm, right down to the little freckles”, and Steve begins to think that maybe he can accept it, maybe. During the story, Steve has a huge impact on Oscar Goldman, the head of the OSI, or Office of Scientific Intelligence.

As Steve and Oscar begin to work with one another more and more, Oscar still treats Steve as though he’s another piece of technology, a “brand new bionic gadget”. But as Steve rebels against him when Oscar asks him to go on a mission, Oscar is forced to realize that he can’t just tell Steve what to do like a computer. He has to take Steve’s actual opinions into account, and realize that he has feelings too. While they are forced to work together, their relationship shifts from being “boss and worker”, to friends, or to an extent, family.

While Steve went through struggles learning how to except his bionics and change his outlook on things and his overall attitude, Steve begins to except his job and quickly learns that the job matches his personality. The job requires courage, strength, speed, and a mind that can get out of serious situations. Steve has all of these capabilities. The sly, smart alick attitude quickly disappears as he learns that he can’t think like that when he has a job of national importance, and Rudy is the person who makes him realize this. While he hated Oscar in the beginning, seeing as he was the one to make the call and make him bionic, Oscar becomes a close friend, someone who he can rely on most. Steve’s character development through the story is quite astronomical in every way, seeing as he now is a responsible, and respectful man, instead of a smart aleky guy. And all it took for him to become that was his bionic extremities. They made him Better, Stronger, and Faster.

Tuesday, May 21, 2013

Trojan Horse

The conflict between Troy and Greece was the main part of the story, and the conflict was never resolved in a happy way, it was resolved when Troy sneakily lead the Trojan Horse into Troy that was full of warriors, but the people of Troy believed held gold and treasure beyond their wildest dreams. The sneakiest part of the whole scenario I believe was how they had everyone tricked into thinking that the war was over and they had won, and then the warriors of Greece popped out of the horse and slaughtered the town. In a way, it could happen nowadays, just they wouldn't be in a horse. Someone could disguise themselves as a member of a different baseball team or something and play with them, then go back to their actual team with the teams techniques.... Or something like that. I haven't actually scene it on TV or anything, but people have mentioned it, and that's how I know about it.

Better, Stronger, Faster


Author’s Note: Cyborg by Martin Caden is a novel of my childhood, considering it was turned into a TV show in 1974, my father was interested in both the novel and the TV show as a kid, and recently, I read the book Cyborg. I have been watching the TV show since I was about 2 years old, and since I read the book, I’ve been dying to do an essay on it! So, enjoy!

Imagine being a world class Astronaut, loved by the entirety of the United States of America. Your career is almost over, and you’ve been spending the last of it test piloting landing vehicles, when suddenly, your entire world literally crashes down around you. How would you feel to wake up from that crash, having only 25% of your original extremities? Would you panic? Would you be scared? Would you lose the will to live? Would you think you were less than human? Colonel Steve Austin rode that exact emotional roller coaster. He was testing the M3F5 prototype space shuttle that was being tested for soft earth landing, and as he was just about to land it crashed. The next time that the Colonel woke up, he was told that he was now in the care of the OSI and was being given a new arm, two new legs, and a brand new left eye to make up for what he had lost in the crash, all courtesy of the US government. He reacted like any of us would, with rejection. Steve was forced to change how he looked at himself, and to accept these new limbs, and their extra special abilities. Bionics.

OSI. Office of Scientific Intelligence. The providers of Steve’s new limbs, also known as Bionics. These bionics have special attributes that set them apart from the typical prosthetic arm or leg; these limbs give Steve the ability to run at the speed of 60 miles per hour, and lift ten men, or more if he wanted to. His eye gives him the ability to see an inhuman amount ahead of him. Oscar Goldman is the head of the OSI and the manager of the Cyborg project. Steve and him start off as adversaries, because Oscar is the one who decided to put the bionic limbs on him. Granted, he didn’t know it was Steve he would get, because if he did, he might not have given Steve the bionics at all. But as the story progresses, Mr.Goldman and Steve become great friends. Dr. Rudy Wells is one of Steve’s closest friends, and the person who performed the operation of attaching the bionics to his broken body. Rudy had been Steve’s doctor before the crash and kept the idea of bionic replacements a secret from him.  Even though bionics are a great thing that could help the entire world, bionics remain classified. As does the word Cyborg.

The word Cyborg. When Steve wakes up in the California Hospital bed, the word is unfamiliar to him. But when Dr. Rudy Wells shows Steve what would soon be attached to him, he hides from it. He obviously does not want something so cold, so robotic  to be put onto his body. But as he realizes he has virtually no choice but to go through with the operation, Steve becomes angry. He loses the will to live, to even try to get up in the morning, and just let’s them do what they want, because in his opinion, he doesn’t have anything to lose. But maybe, he has something wonderful to gain.

After Steve wakes up from the Bionic operation, and looks at his new bionic arm, he tries to cut it off. Granted, it looks just like his human arm, but to him, it’s simply a machine and will never be apart of him. He begins to think he is a monster because of his bionic attachments, and the readers begin to think that he will never be able to accept the bionics that the people of the OSI and Rudy Wells worked so hard to put on him. He seems almost like Frankenstein’s monster in reverse, he thinks of himself as a monster, while everyone else views him as a normal human being, versus Frankenstein’s monster, who is technically a monster, but is truly a good person beneath his abnormal appearance.

When Steve recovers from the surgery that gave him the bionics, and learns how to walk again, see again, and use his left arm again, he soon learns that the OSI is expecting him to pay for his bionic replacements in missions. He has to go on dangerous missions that only a cyborg could complete, in order to fulfill his debt to the OSI. He begrudgingly agrees to these terms. Before Steve goes on his first mission, him and a nurse who tended to him in the Hospital decide to go on a picnic together, when suddenly, a car crashes. Steve is the only one who can save the little boy inside the car, and when he does, he rips the skin on his bionic replacement. The mother of the child sees this, and calls him a monster. That is when any form of development in Steve’s overall character dissolves, and he doesn’t speak to anyone. Until, it is decided for him to go on a mission.

The mission that Steve goes on forces him to go to a terrain he has never been to. The desert. Here Steve is forced to use his super speed, super strength, and the rest of his newly found upgrades. Steve has to free an OSI agent who is imprisoned among terrorists, and also free all the men and women who are trapped there. On this mission, Steve witnesses life and death experiences once again and is reminded of what it is like to actually live like a normal person again. Granted, he will never be a normal person. Steve comes to terms with this fact and embraces it as the upper hand in his fight against the terrorists to get the imprisoned men and women there. The mission is almost like his moment of clarity, the moment when he stops thinking of himself as a monster, and thinks of himself as Steve again.

In the year that has passed since Steve Austin’s crash has been quite an emotional journey. He has gone from a hero, to having no will to live, to thinking he’s a monster, and then finally  being fully aware of himself and being acceptant of the qualities that he thought made him a monster. His bionics made him reach his highest and his lowest, both making him a more well-rounded person.



Thursday, May 2, 2013

After You My Dear Alphonse: Analysis

I don't think that here in Pewaukee we really have a lot of problems with racisim, I do think that we have problems with stereotypes, and that's the other part of After you, My Dear Alphonse. In Pewaukee, we have people saying things about people automatically when they see them, just like Mrs.Wilson in After you, My dear Alphonse. 

Monday, April 29, 2013

Maximum Ride: Cause/Effect


The climax of Maximum Ride: Nevermore is that the sky is literally falling on them, and Max (the main character) and Fang (her boyfriend) go to where a huge tsunami is happening to try to stop it. They wind up getting hit by the tsunami and get washed up on the shore. Now, the reason that they even survived in the first place is because they have gills, and were able to swim to the shore underwater, and survive. Then they go to the other survivors of the tsunami (it was massive), and talk over all that happened. Which, in my opinion, is a lame ending.

One of the only reasons this all happened in the first place was because of a laboratory that Max called the School. At this place, they illegally experimented on kids, making them have 2% avian in them, so they have wings. The names of the people that got these wings are named Gaze, Angel, Fang, Iggy, Nudge, and of course, Max. They form a group and run away from the school to a safe haven, and are safe for about 2 years, before a gang of other mutants come to drag them back to the school for more experimenting, and that’s where the story starts. But as the series progresses, Max realizes that she has to save the world from something, she doesn’t know what it is, but it’s something.

After the tsunami crashed onto the island that they were on, that was full of other mutants like them, they look around and see all the damage that it caused. They know that only a handful of the people that were on the island survived, and the book ends with them going to look for them.

Here’s some surprise information: Angel (The youngest of the group), was the one who told everyone the end of the world was coming. If she hadn’t told anyone that it was happening, and that they were all going to die, they probably would have. Also, if the flock (All the people with the wings) didn’t have gills, the book would’ve ended right there. Which in my opinion would have been better, because the ending of the book makes it seem like there could’ve been more to it, but there wasn’t. The ending should have been Max dying with Fang. A lot of the questions that were asked throughout the book weren’t answer, and I think the entire book could’ve been re-written with a better ending.

Furthermore, the ending of Maximum Ride was unsatisfactory. If the ending had been written better, the whole book would’ve been better, and I personally wouldn’t be so upset with it. The ending was terrible, and if the things that happened weren’t like how they were, I probably would have considered re-reading the entire series, because the books weren’t bad, up until the end.

Tuesday, April 23, 2013

A Clean, Well-Lighted Place: Response

The thing with light and dark in this piece is that it describes two people. The older waiter and the younger waiter. The younger waiter represents the light, while the older waiter represents darkness. What I mean by this is that the younger waiter prefers to be en-coated in light, and surrounded by his friends, while the older waiter prefers the night time, and being alone. He agrees with the old man and wouldn't mind being alone to drink like him, while the younger waiter would rather drink with a group. This is another example of light and dark, seeing as light would technically mean happiness and groups of people, while darkness is typically considered aloneness and solidarity.

Thursday, April 11, 2013

Breakthrough Reality Part 1 of Many


5 years ago

“Come on Alessa! You can do it!” The man said to his little daughter, watching as she made the effort to ride her bike without her training wheels.
“I know I can Daddy!” She called back to her father, blowing the hair out of her face.
“I’ll give you another push.” The little girl’s father said, coming over to her wobbling form and pushing on the back of the bike, satisfied when it moved forward, he let go and watched his little girl ride a bike for the first time.
“Daddy daddy! I got it!!” She said turning the bike this way and that, the tires trying to keep up with her frantic movements.
She smiled brightly, and lost her balance, collapsing onto  the cushiony carpet.
“Well, that should be good for today...” He said, picking her up from the ground and setting her on her feet, then taking the bike and putting it into the closet.
Alessa pouted, but stood up nonetheless, trotting over to one of the curtained windows.
While her father’s back was turned, she lifted up the curtain to take a peek of the outside.
“Alessa! Stay away from the window!” He dad snapped, lifting her up and carrying her away from the window before her eyes could see the outdoors.
“But daddy! I wan--” She began, only to be cut off by his angry voice.
“Alessa. If you step outside, something bad will happen... Something terrible.” He shuddered, and looked at the black letters that were forever tattooed onto his skin.
Human.

Chapter 1

My eyes fluttered open and I looked around my room, noticing how late in the afternoon it was.
Where are they?” I thought to myself, standing up and stretching. I walked out of my room and to the living room, looking around for my parents.
Huh.
They left again.
They’ve been doing that alot.... Going outside I mean.
Oh jeez.
None of this makes sense to you, does it?
Alright. Let me explain for you.
I’m Alessa Caverly.
I have never been outside my home in my entire life.
I’ve lived behind locked doors and closed curtains, my parents training me to fear the unknown.
But let me share a little secret with you...
I actually really like the unknown.
Knowing that something out there might kill me kinda makes me excited.
When I passed their empty room, and when I couldn’t hear the sound of the radio coming from the living room, I knew something was wrong. Where they abducted by aliens or something?
Or worse...
Where they...
Oh god, I didn’t even want to think about it.
“MOM!!!” I called, and of course,  my attempts failed, the silence being my only reply. “Great...” I mumbled, running a hand through my brown hair.
I dragged my tired body to the kitchen where I opened up the cabinets, pulling out the box labeled “cereal”.
Then I grabbed a bowl, opening the box of cereal and filling it with the tasteless flakes of vitamins. Then I grabbed the milk and poured it in, making my cereal.
I sat down, putting a spoon in my cereal and getting a good mouthful.
Yup, this is my daily existence. Wake up, eat, lessons, eat, free time, sleep.
Day in day out, the routine never fails to take up my time and energy. My parents insist that it’s the “safest” for me, but what does that mean anyway? I’m safe right where I am.
Once I was done eating my bland cereal, I stood up from the table and went over to the windows, peeling back the curtain slowly. Of course, that’s when I realise that my dad put wood boards up on the window to block me from seeing the outside.
I sighed, putting my hand on the wood boards in defeat. Of course he did that. Typical. I thought to myself and went to the couch, plopping down and opening up my learning textbook and reading the next lesson.